a truly captivating story. I love it. you have to overlook some grammatical and spelling errors. ultimately a beautifully written story. I love each of the characters.

I love this story.

update soon

loving it. please update soon

Dearest author please post more soon. I need more. I love this story so much and cant wait for the next chapter!

booyah! finally! dang nice writing.

I have a feeling Hector has a Sinister plan of his own..

I still find lloyd annoying.

nooo not now! bad lloyd

Noooo!!!! bad words, bad words! cliff hanger? really? you meanie! I love your work but dang! Nice job I'm still begging for more. love it

more please, I cant wait for the next exciting twist.

can't wait for next chapter

I'm super addicted, I cant wait for more! Dearest author release more soon!

plz write more.

I'm enjoying this book and I'm looking forward to seeing how it goes! I think cole has waited long enough!!!

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Cant wait for the next chapters.

the only reason lloyd even has a shot is because she has repressed her memories. I really hope she gets back together with Zack. For some reason I see lloyd as the villain. I am completely biased. TEAM ZACK all the way

finally Zack is back

I love this chapter. sometimes a normal day in the life of a character it's just what you need.