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I donβt understand where this fanfic gets such ratings from, the ability is interesting, the story is weak. The unknown things in the first 10 chapters completely discourage the desire to read further, because it seems that they take me for an idiot who is forced to believe what is happening there, and that everything gets away with mΡ
HorrΓvel, o autor tentou criar uma histΓ³ria trΓ‘gica pra criar um protagonista Dark, mas Γ© simplesmente ridΓculo e sem sentido, o protagonista parece um deficiente mental, todo mundo parece um deficiente mental. A ideia do quirk Γ© atΓ© interessante, mas todo o desenvolvimento Γ© impossΓvel de ler
My only problem with this story is that Erin and Jess seem WAY to forced. Not to mention Erin is overly psychotic and stalkerish. Jess seems slightly mentally unstable and not in a way that u would normally be for someone in her situation. Also the hero name and Vigi name are both just needlessly bad. Great story and ideas. But it feels like your way too forceful in implementing your OCs. Also Kaite was just thrown in and just NEW everything with little explanation.