well... seems fine. grammar is not good but not terrible. it can be read. also is mc powers from darwin x-men from the comics or the nerfed version of the movie?
ZeOwl
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also. chapters are extremely short. a normal chapter = 3-5 chapters
;- ; grammar every time man, its understandable I've always had pretty bad language skills. At least you read it...