Reviews of My Girlfriend Wants Me to Share My Harem?

Hi everyone, this is my first time publishing a novel on Webnovel. It is a comic story that is portrayed as a satire to the reincarnation genre. A 5-star material and no less. Would be waiting for your reviews and suggestions. Do add it your library.

It's funny and entertaining. However, it could be more funny... when these kind of novels are written, you best give your brain a holiday, go all the way - make crazy crazier, dumb, dumber and horny, more hornier. Give it a try.. it's great.

This is my review for first 3 chapters. The story got me hooked. The MC is hilarious. I can't stop laughing, whenever he thought that he will get some cheat or any power. The girlfriend of his is a real sadist. 😆😆 Can't wait to see where this story will lead to.

Haha, I love your story. its such a great novel and I highly recommend it if youre looking for a funny move to relieve stress or smth. good job shirogane

The main character is very goofy which helps set up very comedic situations. The plot is starting up well and will probably get funnier as they go on. The only problem is you can sometimes make the jokes a little too complicated so avoid doing that a little but keep writing!

Your world background still lacking, I advised you search a new reference from another novel, does not have to be same genre. Don't making story pace too straightforward, you have to describe protagonist point of view from his experiences in his past, hobbies or something and explain how he felt and his reaction from her sudden of change, you should take a note from other reference. Don't forget this element. Like,' I never see another girls smiles so brightly, I wanted her to smile forever' At least, you have a good sense of comedy. And I am pleased if you include some romantic comedy and cheating joke experience from another Japanese manga. Of course, you have to include a sentence like this. 'Feeling dandere maid's gaze at me, it gives me a chill.' Making the plot sound interesting, it will making people interested what is going on next. I enjoyed your novel, don't stop, will ya? I will give you bonus star if you follow my advise. Success for you,

It's so funny! This is actually the first time I'm reading a combination of normal romance, harem, and Yuri. Like I seriously didn't know such a type of combination was there. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to more updates.

I laughed so badly while reading this novel. Your book is exactly on the spot..that ow..lol..I can hardly control my laughter .Btw I really enjoyed reading your chapters. But it is a pity they were just 2. Keep updating author. I loved this book.

so with there being so few chapters I feel like the story hasn't really started yet and there is a lot of mystery or unanswered questions and the title hasn't even made sense yet so I feel like the main story line hasn't appeared yet. the guy also doesn't seem to be the type to want a harem so I have no idea why it is named so unless the main storyline hasn't happened yet and it's all a set up

wow, the book is a hidden gem.. the mc is so funny that the book has become my laughter pill of the day. good work as a new author.. hope the book rises well.

What a spectacular description: narrator and protagonist ... it is very intriguing as well as exciting. The character ... is taken to a confrontation out of the ordinary, one ends up wondering Who is it !? Until you realize that it is a fun and funny story.

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I have understood Nothing that I just read , can someone please sum it up in a reply and send it to me I'm confused as fug. soooo ill really appreciate some explaining wtf just happen.

Woah, what?! This is amazinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg I love it so much! The plot, the flow EVERYTHING! WAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA