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Dzamn. It's amazing. When the author described the mc to be handsome and charming, I immediately believed it. The book cover gave it all. Also, the way the author writes the descriptions and the details of the work is utterly superb. Gosh, the author's vocabulary is really outstanding. Overall, the book is very good! Keep it up!
Excuse me, what?
THIS GOT ME HOOKED UPPPPPPPPPPP
Hayst, mga Montefalco nga naman.
I will never forgive him
I regret reading this again... I'm so angry rn
"Tentacles" oh, no...
Wut?
Oh... he actually beats them.
I thought he was going to beat them to death if they make mistakes. But, oof- proved me wrong, thankfully.
Heyyyyy!! An honest review here! I don't like to keep things in suspense so I'll just get to the point. The thing that I noticed is that the story flow was too fast. I suggest that you make the flow longer. Like, making the protagonist "suffer" in the first chapters of the story a little bit. (That's what I like to call it hehe) Although the story, plot, and grammar (the grammar beautiful I might add) is overall amazing. Keep it up Author-kun! LOVE LOVE
be somebody, just wanna be me, be me~ I wanna be me-e-e~~~