Reviews of My Empire of Dreams
My Empire of Dreams
RaSi
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- Character Design
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Really great job!! The author created a really good system story and characters, a big world where we learn about the MC without being overwelmed with too many info. And what I really like is that he was able to avoid heavy cliché in an already overcrowded genre without making it forced, everything is really fluid and natural. I really hope that this work will have the success it deserves.
The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his/her hardwork.
The plot is fast. The pace is fast. There is little in the way of originality to background characters or world building. It’s another system novel that flies way to fast. The background characters opinions of the MC change with the flip of a switch. They go from years of knowing about him and his ways to adoring him over night. The troupes are pretty standard and overall it lacks when it has potential. If the novel would slow it down and it might find that it has more to offer than quick blurbs.
It definitely has a hooking title page and synopsis. The plot line is unique and well-written while the character design is interesting. Building this fascinating world really makes use of a good descriptive, and though there are rooms for improvement, I say that the overall idea and concept of this story is its strongest charm.
Sorry for the late review, brother. Something came up. Anyways, your story has an interesting concept and system you won't in other novels, good job, brother😉😉😉. Writing Quality, is not perfect of course!!! But I hate to say it to you that your mistakes is not something that could easily proofread. Proofreading It carelessly would affect the transition of events and damage the story development so far. So I recommend to master grammar then proofreading It yourself. Anyways, this is a nice book you've got here, brother. Keep it up!!!😊😊😊
