Reviews of Marvel: The God of Mutants
Marvel: The God of Mutants
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Very interesting. A decisive MC, he does not hesitate in his decisions, wise, intelligent, a little cold but that comes from his detachment from life. This novel has many things that appeal to me, and I recommend it. (Use translator from Latin Spanish to English. In case you don't understand something)
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Dont like it. People not having empathy or little doesnt mean they dont desire relationships or love. And this mc is running away from everything even things he shouldnt have to run from also. People dont just randomly lose control of their power only when a external factor is included or they have some condition its just like anger it doesnt come from nowhere usually
the writing is kinda ****ed up, like in one or two places but other than that its okay..now the story...its dope..MC has gravity powers.....and he isnt afraid to use em,,,like dude just crushed people...he aint no *****...this is dope continue....anyone fucks with MC, crush em..anyone tires to kill em....obliterate em........ suggestion: fundamental forces...give MC the entire package......make MC use his brains,,,,add some romance and fluff, just pls build it.....no shallow ****...also dont make any popular paring,,,try to do something new...**: no dxd style ****,,,if ya do it..do warn, dont want to read about a pokemon MC who go after moms and wives
if you are here for god of mutant like the title you are at the wrong fanfic..... the writing is alright,,, update is good too and that's it... mc is weak, weird and make some questionable decision. to me mc is like a lost, edgy child with power.. in conclusion read it to pass time if you have nothing better to do..
I have just finished two chapters and the writing is giving me a headache. It's like someone put everything in the blender and the mess that came out is this story. I don't have any problems with your characters or your story, but your writing definitely needs a recheck. The sentences are mangled, the grammar is well- not there, paragraphs are disjointed and the punctuations are dead. Seriously, run it through a word processor or have it checked through Grammarly or any of its substitutes.
what sins he has, why are they talking like he went into a school and killed everyone there, the only things i saw him do was kill the people who had captured him, with the fury i can even understand why this is behind him and wants him dead after all he is the government and the government cannot have that kind of person without being under his control.
