i have to agree with the other comment so far i haven't seen anything wrong he did given the situations/circumstances presented. yet he will have a crisis of 'trying to repair' his actions, I even imagine him walking down the path of becoming a saint now. Look, I'm not talking about killing everyone, I'm not talking about not treating your people well. but it's not for me an mc like that, it comes with this crisis issue of 'repairing' his actions. congrats his story looks cool and good luck, it's just not for me.
it would be better to put the name and not just the initials at the end of the speech, it gets weird and for people like me who saw the 100 only a little it's hard to identify who said what with the initials. anyway, looks interesting with this beginning