Review Detail of amaturewriter in Marvel: The God of Mutants

the writing is kinda ****ed up, like in one or two places but other than that its okay..now the story...its dope..MC has gravity powers.....and he isnt afraid to use em,,,like dude just crushed people...he aint no *****...this is dope continue....anyone fucks with MC, crush em..anyone tires to kill em....obliterate em........ suggestion: fundamental forces...give MC the entire package......make MC use his brains,,,,add some romance and fluff, just pls build it.....no shallow ****...also dont make any popular paring,,,try to do something new...**: no dxd style ****,,,if ya do it..do warn, dont want to read about a pokemon MC who go after moms and wives