Review Detail of Heretoc in Marvel: The God of Mutants

I have just finished two chapters and the writing is giving me a headache. It's like someone put everything in the blender and the mess that came out is this story. I don't have any problems with your characters or your story, but your writing definitely needs a recheck. The sentences are mangled, the grammar is well- not there, paragraphs are disjointed and the punctuations are dead. Seriously, run it through a word processor or have it checked through Grammarly or any of its substitutes.