Marvel-Comics: Overgeared

basic battle training fanfic without any character development. it just train fight train fight train fight. so Dragonball but worse cause u read it. it's also like all those wuxia novels. Where their is a bunch of beautiful women who know but the MC says he cant have distractions. so he cuts off his D and becomes a incel.

another gpt trash

after reading to the current chapter(19) released on 1-2-2024 I am here to say this book is a masterpiece of wriggting i love how the author uses the plots slow at first but that makes it more in person.

it's a good story. but it's more like a diary, not much interaction with characters not much character development or relationships. I read until 33 or smth and I'm stopping here not my type of story. lacks depth by a lot, it's a shallow, Mc grind story. would be good to kill time I guess, but the story is

I had low expectations of this but so far it really seems well thought out unlike other Novels. It is a HIDDEN GEM and has potential to become one of the BEST ff..

It's a solid story and while I question how long it will last it is quite enjoyable to read. P.s. hopefully there is more Jurassic/primal parts as that was pretty cool.

Binged it in one sitting liked it so far.

In general. A time skip fanfic. Many time skips. Although I understand it because what you want to tell would be boring and tedious parts to read and write. But with so many jumps I don't know that you are counting correctly.

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This is a heavily AI edited fic from chapter 1 onwards. Because of the ai editing you can expect nearly all dialogues to make no sense and also feel extremely formal and robotic. The author said this was a grindy fanfic and he is right, but even he ended up admitting that the grindy aspect is to much when you realize it takes 3 years for the mc to finish level 1. Still recommend to read if you’re new to webnovels since you won’t have prejudices to ai editing, just enjoy while you can because you will slowly compare ai to real work and begin to be irritated by it

MC Keep Level Up And Level Up And Level Up But MC Weak As If MC Level 1 And Mc Keep Level 100 Character Story Going Nowhere And Keep Level Up MC Have No End Goals

Прекрасное произведение.удачи писателю в дальнейшем.и что бы у вас выздоровела рука.и жду дальнейшего продолжение произведения.даю свою оценку произведению сто и десяти

Es un fanfic genial 👌🏻 su principio es un poco lento pero es entendible ya después que pasa su primera etapa su desarrollo se acelera pero es sólido, su desarrollo como herrero y artesano es sobresaliente ya es muy interesante leer cómo consigue los materiales y desarrolla su técnica para fabricar artefactos y en las formas en que se empodera son razonables, realmente interesante 😉🤙🏻

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In short, average! says Marvel comics, but in terms of power it falls short! Marvel comics are complete nonsense with the destruction of the World every day, but here the MC can still live! 1 day Marvel comics - living tribunal or the Beyonder killed MC

If you are a simple person and don't place much emphasis on the quality of the story this is for you But if you emphasize the things I mentioned, it's not worth reading, what I liked most was the system, which was very different from most systems I know, it's really very good!

The story's all over the place, I'm not sure there's a plan for it. It somehow feels artificial.

can only get 1 xp per use of his skill then it goes on a 1 day cooldown and it requires 1000 xp to level up once. now this wouldn't be too bad if the skill was something like and upgrade or transformation skill nope it just adds options to the item and they have a chance to fail. it's not worth reading