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Reviews of Martial Spirit World [Old Version]

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Martial Spirit World [Old Version]

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Beyond_Namez
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Enlightened_Being
Enlightened_BeingLv6Enlightened_Being

"P.S this novel is not for those who do not like killing. Seriously, if you like a good guy MC who only kills guys and spares a girl then add her to his own HAREM then this novel is not for you." with this on the Synopsis, I don't need to read to give you a 5 stars, I will give you even before reading your story because I like it.

Programmer
ProgrammerLv11Programmer

Nice story. I like it so far. Remind me of reverend insanity. No romance so far. Anyway hope not a harem. Harem seem unrealistic to me. Also hope there is unreasonable plot armor. The one thing that sort of bug me. Is how grave robbers come the day he woke up. Like out of last 3 month they come now. Right when he woke up. Out of the last 90 days. They come now. Isnt that a little coincidental.

FallacyPage
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Fallacy here, ignore the shameless 5 five star. I just want to write to make this a good novel and let my readers enjoy. But for those people that want a romance so desperately, I may not be able to provide in the early chapters. I also want to write a romance but from my past novels rushing it never once worked for me, I want to write an overpowered MC who kills a lot of people he doesn't like alright? So if I were to rush the romance and introduce a two-dimensional heroine no one will like that so please understand. I want to write romance as fast as possible but I also want to flesh out the MC (although I suck at doing so.) P.S. I like reading comments and reviews alike, whether it be trash talk or praise I always read all the responses that I get, especially the ones that point my mistakes that let me improve. This is a long rambling review.

LEGENDS
LEGENDSLv4LEGENDS

This is a great novel and I mean great and if you read the first 4 chapters you will love it too ( and if you don't you need to have a check up at the hospital ). The thing that I would love to happen is if you can post more chapters a day. =)

peerless123
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StormSnail
StormSnailLv14StormSnail

This is a Great novel that no questions asked gets my blood boiling everytime I read through it I highly recommend giving this one a read. :-D

LeoRex
LeoRexLv4LeoRex

great story plus the brutal character of MC is necessary for the violent set-up of the story.. although the mc doesnt care much about gender is also necessary because in a world where trust is britle or fragile.. trusting other character would be risky...so i think the author really made a reasonable MC for being brutal....i hope the author would release few chapters at a time

PoisonHorn
PoisonHornLv5PoisonHorn

After reading 15 chapters. This novel has very good potential for top 100. Setting is good, character is unique unlike others where there's killing a lot and acting like a hero saving others. Translation is not good. Too many fault in Grammer. Give it consistency and daily updates; it'll surely spear

AngelsCreed
AngelsCreedLv11AngelsCreed

Also hoping that the mc doesn't change too much. I have seen too many stories with dark MCs suddenly switch to being good guys. From cold blooded killing to friendship is rainbows

AngelsCreed
AngelsCreedLv11AngelsCreed

Just wanted to ask, how is the chapter release like going forward? Irregular or set chapter release? Would really love it if you could do regular release! This novel is really good but i don't want the anxiety of not knowing when the next chapter is coming out, ya feel?

icingfire
icingfireLv13icingfire

I was really getting into this story but the author said he was going to do a mass release that was 5 months ago other then that he did a great job sticking to the mc idea and creating a world

OmnipotentApeGod
OmnipotentApeGodLv11OmnipotentApeGod

Too funny I was just about to leave when I was reading the synopsis and I saw hero for the people. Then I scroll down a bit more and author said there would be a lot of violent and it's not for the soft of heart and I have to stay. Hopefully no stupid harem and if there is a harem hopefully it a good one.

butthead
buttheadLv10butthead

Well written good story good read ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒโœŒ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒโœŒ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒโœŒ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒ Well written good story good read ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒโœŒ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒโœŒ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒโœŒ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒ

SnakeEatSun
SnakeEatSunLv11SnakeEatSun

Wang Xue I wonder what that cat really I need to know badly.I have the next chapter can come out quickly I can not wait to read it.I love thing like blood and poison.I wonder if he going to get a martial Spirit with the blood or poison Attribute.

SnakeEatSun
SnakeEatSunLv11SnakeEatSun

Martial Spirit World is well plotted.It sad that the author can not update recently I really love this story.I like the character Wang Xue he is ruthless and a demon the kind of main character I like best.

man305
man305Lv4man305

good job๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿ”ง๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿณ๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿ’ผ๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿณ๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿ”ง๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿ’ผ๐Ÿ‘จโ€โš–๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿซ๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐ŸŒพ๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿซ๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€โš–๐Ÿ‘ณโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿคด๐Ÿง•๐Ÿ‘ฎโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€โœˆ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐ŸŽจ๐Ÿ‘ฒ๐Ÿ•ต๏ธโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐ŸŽจ๐Ÿ‘ฒ๐Ÿ•ต๏ธโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ‘ฎโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ’‚โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ‘ณโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿคด๐Ÿ‘ฑโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿง•๐Ÿงœโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿงžโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿงœโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿง›โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿงโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿงœโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿง›โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿงโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿงœโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿง›โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™Žโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿงœโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿง›โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™Žโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿงœโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿง›โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™Žโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿง–โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ’†โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ’‡โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ›€๐Ÿ’‡โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ’†โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿšถโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ™‹โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿšถโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ’‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ›€๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ‘ฏโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ›€๐Ÿ’‡โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ’†โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ›€๐Ÿ’‡โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ’†โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ›€๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿ‘ฆโ€๐Ÿ‘ฆ๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿ‘งโ€๐Ÿ‘ง๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿ‘ฆ๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿ‘ฆโ€๐Ÿ‘ฆ๐Ÿคณ๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿ‘งโ€๐Ÿ‘ง๐Ÿคณ๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿ‘ง๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿ‘ฆ๐Ÿคณ๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿ‘ฆ๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿ‘ฆ๐Ÿคณ๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿ‘ฆ๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿ‘ฆโ€๐Ÿ‘ฆ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿคฒ๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ‘Š๐ŸคŸ๐Ÿคฒ๐ŸคŸ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿคœ๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿคš๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ‘˜๐Ÿงฆ๐Ÿ‘š๐Ÿ‘“๐Ÿ‘•๐Ÿงฃ๐Ÿ‘“๐Ÿ‘•๐Ÿ‘š๐Ÿ‘“๐Ÿ‘•๐Ÿ‘š

IQuoted
IQuotedLv5IQuoted

Good gooe good good good good good. But not to goor not too goor not 5oo tood stioocgood still good stirll goood r3coommended do4 cruel pp3epple

N_addictOoO
N_addictOoOLv11N_addictOoO

Good original novel. Its been enjoyable so far. Only critic I have is the comparison between the strength of the realms. How does a normal cultivator differ from the MC? You've rushed through the spirit realm without taking the chance to explain the difference in strength in comparison to a mortal.

Xenopia
XenopiaLv10Xenopia

Just fantastic this is the story I've been looking for an mc who stays true to himself i cannot wait till the next chapter comes out and i appreciate the first two volumes being free because i am reading too many stories that went full on premium real quick so just saying keep up the great work ๐Ÿ‘Œ