Reviews of Locked down with a Stranger

Hey you humans who loves some love love in the air, PLS READ THIS STORY! IT’S AMAZING!! The plot is nice and the story progression is smooth as well. Love the characters and your description of them are already written quite nicely. The only issue for me is the emotion or the expression that you’re showing from the characters. Do try to re-read it again. Cos in some cases, I couldn’t catch it when it should be an awkward situation. I can only realize there’s awkwardness when you literally tell me in the story “awkward” And then with Aliya too when she suddenly become unfriendly. I was a bit taken aback since I didn’t detect anything wrong beforehand. But yeah, overall, I love the story and thus the five stars. I hope my review can push your under reviews up as well. Keep up the good work! P. S. You should join a discord group for writer. It may help you with writing and if u ever need a hand in your story for new ideas. Plus, u can hv fun with other writers as well ahahah

Can't rate higher without reading more, but the potential here is palpable. Your writing, from what I can tell, has good fundamentals. Your flow is natural, as well is the prose. The only problems that I see are grammatical errors and some text reblocking, something another once over can fix easily. This is bound for improvement, just keep on writing. 👍