Review Detail of Kiiara in Locked down with a Stranger

Hey you humans who loves some love love in the air, PLS READ THIS STORY! IT’S AMAZING!! The plot is nice and the story progression is smooth as well. Love the characters and your description of them are already written quite nicely. The only issue for me is the emotion or the expression that you’re showing from the characters. Do try to re-read it again. Cos in some cases, I couldn’t catch it when it should be an awkward situation. I can only realize there’s awkwardness when you literally tell me in the story “awkward” And then with Aliya too when she suddenly become unfriendly. I was a bit taken aback since I didn’t detect anything wrong beforehand. But yeah, overall, I love the story and thus the five stars. I hope my review can push your under reviews up as well. Keep up the good work! P. S. You should join a discord group for writer. It may help you with writing and if u ever need a hand in your story for new ideas. Plus, u can hv fun with other writers as well ahahah