Review Detail of MokouFriedChicken in Locked down with a Stranger

Item: Locked down with a Stranger
Rating: 4

Review detail

MokouFriedChickenLv34yrMokouFriedChicken

Can't rate higher without reading more, but the potential here is palpable. Your writing, from what I can tell, has good fundamentals. Your flow is natural, as well is the prose. The only problems that I see are grammatical errors and some text reblocking, something another once over can fix easily. This is bound for improvement, just keep on writing. 👍

Locked down with a Stranger

ElsbroSparka

Liked it!

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ElsbroSparkaAuthorElsbroSparka

Can you specify some grammatical errors? Thank you for your review though.

4yr

MokouFriedChickenLv3MokouFriedChicken

It's not grammar per se, but the sentence cut offs. Some sentences feel like they should've been one while others felt like they've should've been separate. Very minor details really.

ElsbroSparka:Can you specify some grammatical errors? Thank you for your review though.

4yr

ElsbroSparkaAuthorElsbroSparka

I see. I'll keep that in mind, and try to fix it.

MokouFriedChicken:It's not grammar per se, but the sentence cut offs. Some sentences feel like they should've been one while others felt like they've should've been separate. Very minor details really.

4yr