Charlottes
Just one problem after reading half of the total chapter uploaded, a blatant immersion breaking with the CRINGE AF comment from the editor. -Breaks Immersion -Breaks flow of the story -Disrupting the story as a whole in said chapter -A drop in quality of writing because stupid immersion breaking editor comment put that stupid thing at the end of the chapter. Better yet get someone who KNOWS what they are doing. Its killing your story author, and I cant bother to read further with every stupid chapter I am reading, the immersion being broken by a dumb editor comment thinking its funny while its actually disrupting the story overall quality.
ive read a little of this and i know im not going to continue this story. its not that this story is bad it is actually fine. i would continue reading it if there wasnt this one thing the author decided to add for no reason. the mc of this story has absolutely no expressions in his face, he shows no emotion whatsoever to the point that his fake smile is described as creepy. the mc is described as average in every category btw i still dont know what the mc looks like just that he is decent looking. i just cant get over the fact that the chat in the story is more interesting than the mc.
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