Review Detail of Banana_Bomb in Live Streaming Through The Multiverse!

Just one problem after reading half of the total chapter uploaded, a blatant immersion breaking with the CRINGE AF comment from the editor. -Breaks Immersion -Breaks flow of the story -Disrupting the story as a whole in said chapter -A drop in quality of writing because stupid immersion breaking editor comment put that stupid thing at the end of the chapter. Better yet get someone who KNOWS what they are doing. Its killing your story author, and I cant bother to read further with every stupid chapter I am reading, the immersion being broken by a dumb editor comment thinking its funny while its actually disrupting the story overall quality.