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dam it good

this fanfic is really good. I enjoy reading it. I hope you still cantinue translate it until this fanfic finish

the worm girl from fate😔

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I understand your desire to see the protagonist with instinctive control over her abilities, but please keep in mind that she was just an ordinary human before and had no knowledge of magic. The fact that she was able to use her abilities at all is already quite remarkable, given her lack of experience. Additionally, the protagonist's wish was to be able to use all forms of magic, not to be able to use them all perfectly or instinctively. While it's true that most spirits have instinctive control over their abilities, the protagonist is unique in that she is still learning and growing in her new form. Finally, I appreciate your feedback, but please keep in mind that this is a fanfic and anything can happen in this fictional world. While the protagonist may not have instinctive control over her abilities at the moment, who knows what kind of growth and development she may experience in the future?

ah, thank you. I will pass the offer :)

arent I already doing that. can't you see that when she does that, control the water and wind, even if it is not much. she was just a normal human before reincarnated as spirit, so you tell me she is not doing that on instinct when using her power before?:)

Thank you for your comment and for reading my story. I understand your concerns about the protagonist's behavior, but please keep in mind that as a person who has experienced a drastic change in gender and body, the character is still trying to adjust to her new identity and the societal expectations that come with it. Her behavior may not conform to traditional notions of masculinity, but it's important to recognize that gender is a complex and fluid aspect of identity, and everyone's experiences are different. It's also worth noting that the protagonist's mental state has changed significantly since her previous life, and she now identifies more strongly as a girl. This means that her behavior and thought processes may differ from what you might expect based on her previous gender. Regarding your question about yuri, I can assure you that the story does explore romantic relationships between girls, and this will become more apparent as the story progresses. Finally, I appreciate your feedback about chapter length, and I will try to take this into consideration as I continue to write. Thank you for taking the time to read my work, and I hope that you will continue to follow the story.

aria eating

yes

in the early morning I get feeling

Yes...... now do the-

ohhh rewrite?

sure do

Already 2 year huh

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Yes