love the little cat shenanigans, always refreshing especially when the target is his dear mom lol

its just getting better, Brootherhood, Ji You and Peng Lai, its really lovely to read something came true, like what if the umbrella corporation goes head to head with cyberpunk Militech kind of thing.

I love how the author messes with fury head, its funny. someone as serious as Nick Fury finding out that what Natahsa said is the truth and its verbatim no less is just funny.

good gosh, this novel brings soo much nostalgia.

too much out of whack on power trip. the idea is decent making potential changes to the future plots, but it becomes out of whack on power scaling and forced justification. " I'll kill kushina so minato can commit genocide" is just a no no (this doesn't happen but a good enough example)

welp it was not half bad, but its just getting beyond ridiculous at this point. pain is gone adopted and being a good guy, forced plot to kill the wife so MC is justified to go on a rampage and commit genocide. It becomes more and more forced. If you plan on writing something else, tone down the power trip and forced justification, one chapter wife dead next a genocide happens because of it. its becoming too much out of whack on a power trip.

its getting blander and blander with the ridiculous power he has. you will write yourself into a corner sooner rather than later.

just wish the amnesia nonsense with Aika to be over soon. It's kind of redundant and pointless doing it so far into the plot, its just a curse of writing, and most readers will hate it, if it was done earlier that would be easier to swallow.

you have time to read an entire chapter yet not this? can you tell me why? It sounds pretentious ain't it? do it yourself, you're not a kid.

yeah aint happening bud, not with the groundwork slowly setting in stronger by the day.

why reply to me? I'm not the one who didn't understand squat.

you won't enjoy many books then if that's what you think. and this is a translation, so wrong place to complain about it. besides many great books have decent villains that are dedicated to them entirely, a chapter or two, and many classic books/comics/mangas/tv shows/movies that are great have amazing side characters. a book digital or not is only useful and entertaining when opened, and so is the mind, its only useful if its opened. that's even more true since the author made a disclosure specifically explaining why and "You" random person from the internet still thinks its bad because its not MC-related. narrow-minded much?

Oh, Mr. Dumpling guy will be mad, and so will Tony Stark.

tell me if you want to have a one on one chat, I'll invite and set up a discord server or something. about the link, I don't know about the type of your contract, but you are generally not allowed to post on other sites or any other link like p@t-r-e0-n. But this is a fanfic, which should never have been possible to have a contract in the first place. so your case is unique. Here is what is best for you, contact the persons that handle your contract or contact webnovel regarding your contract. preferably we get to talk first since there are a few things I want you to be aware of.

never said merlin was not a Slytherin. not gonna argue is, was, not even the context. "King Arthur was a legendary Celtic Briton who, according to medieval histories and romances, was the leader of the" bla bla bla. "Merlin was a Slytherin student who graduated from Hogwarts. He was Salazar's prized student, blablabla" you get the idea right. yeah, no, you don't even consider the mafia chick, voldy being OP, Sirius, Andromeda is buddy-buddy with Bella, based on the chapter itself Merlin was not mentioned as a Slytherin graduate but instead as a significant figure, which is an Arthurian Legend take. that's the short of it, since I have too much time and am bored out of my mind here is a mini essay to enjoy. #essay version wrong, if you want to point out who causes the butterfly, it is not even the MC, the mafia chick is the cause, Voldemort was the cause since he somehow is linked to the Netherworld, The mysterious group was the cause, MC dad happens to be the cause of a change, probably because he accidentally somehow, stumbled upon them and knew stuff he shouldn't have about the mystery group. If that didn't happen, Bellatrix change won't even happen since probably they met when MC dad was being hunted, hints of other entities intervening with that world since the mafia chick was hinted to belong to another entity, possibly this other entity is not alone hence netherworld stuff. AR doesn't want that and decides to play the game these entities are playing, bringing other souls from another world or "pick a random person and give them a system". MC having the system and stuff is just a byproduct of the first change caused by an anomaly. From a story point of view, MC is "the unlucky guy to be trapped between a rock and a hard place" if this butterfly effect didn't even happen, he won't be a street urchin stealing stuff and dragged in to deal with supercharged Voldemort. IT IS AU, it will never be because one person if the "the past" changes too, not just one simple change. Voldemort OP, Bellatrix is a minister, Sirius is free from the start of 1st year of Potter, Andromeda is in communication with Bella, and duh, the history is magic is even changed since "Merlin" in here is heavily hinted towards Arthurian legends, no mention about him being Slytherin, based on what is written there in the chapter, irrelevant to my previous comment since it was a reply to whether Merlin was a Slytherin or not, which he was, "was" because he is dead and graduated. I can still go on, but I digress.

a harem in an originally "non harem" story and world. you bet its going to be dumb. The auxiliary volume already shows it, all wish fulfillment checklists. Daphne, Hermione, Tonks, and Fleur on top of all that, Big red flags of writing stuff to satisfy their inner perv fantasy, it will only ruin the story and it shows, dumb decision, just follows canon which is fine if there is actual impacts and changes things for the future events but nope, it was taken down and now reposted, it can be said, there were no changes whatsoever since then. Waiting for the story to progress further is a vain effort since it will spiral into a mess of lemon chapters R18 stuff while the overall story is still a cringe carnival. Next time, pick an actual harem world for harem stuff.

I love how organic it feels, fish is exactly like that of a 6-8 year old troublemaker, a chill slice of life and refreshing.

are you going to continue your blue citadel there?

taking a wild guess, coldplay

yes, he was, but this is AU, so there is that. Probably using Arthurian legend.