Reviews of Lilith's Rise [Drop]

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Counterbalancing the dude who asked if it was yuri cuz he put 1 star

There's no character interactions, most of the chapters are filled with info dumps, status and abilities that will not be used anyways. The story is rushed too. Writing Quality: Good grammar... still has some errors, Updates: 5/5 Story Development: 1/5, there's no development it's all narration. Character Design: 1/5, there's no dialogue between the characters, and if they have it's short.. I don't even know how close the relationship does she have with her parents... World Background: 1/5,

My biggest problem with this fic was that there is no interaction with characters, nor are there dialogues, it is pure narration of what the MC does, and abusing the system, not the MC but the Author. So he fattens the chapters with info dumps, stats and skills that nobody cares because she will never use. Regarding the narration, it feels like an MHA speed run, since there is no dialogue or even thoughts of the protagonist, everything feels very accelerated. writing: 2. Errors, info dumps abuser, no dialogue. Updates: 5 starts so far. Dev: 1 star. Canon speed run, MC no goal, not even a relationship. Character. 1 star. flat Worl: 1 start. flat earthers would like it (I drop at chap 13, start of the sport festival)

There is no interaction in this fanfic. Characters other than the MC are rarely even mentioned. MC also doesn't have any development other than using the system to become op. As much as I like the fanfic idea, I have to admit that it's boring to read because there's no story to read.

I really like what I've read so far in this novel and I'm looking forward to more. The reason I didn't give this novel 5 stars is because there are a lot of spelling mistakes like quark instead of quirk or custom instead of costume, while these aren't big mistakes I feel that they diminish from the quality of the story. An easy fix if you run it through a grammar correction program like grammarly.

it's great story I honestly like the comedy and the op mc too bad it dropped still [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I want to start by saying that I only leave honest reviews. so first off is writing quality, I have nothing to say here cause you already know. second world background, you didn't give enough detail. It doesn't matter if you are using an already built world or not you need details. everything else as far as I can tell is superb.

Why is it drop author-son

Yes boy became a girl this is what I like nice author-sama I approve you have the prove that you prove the prove of the yuri... Just writing b**lsh*t don't mind me

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this has some great potential even with the op MC. sure the mc is op in one world does not mean it will be in the next. thanks for the work author and i hope you keep doing this.

The writing quality can be improved like a lot, the book have a lot of spelling mistakes and some sentences don't make sense There are chapter every day Well the story goes as any other mha fanfic nothing to add here but the mc can go to other universes The mc is really bland aside from knowing she is lazy you don't know much about her personality and there are other ocs that are just thrown into the story World background is just mha so whatever