Review Detail of EroNelle in Lilith's Rise [Drop]

There's no character interactions, most of the chapters are filled with info dumps, status and abilities that will not be used anyways. The story is rushed too. Writing Quality: Good grammar... still has some errors, Updates: 5/5 Story Development: 1/5, there's no development it's all narration. Character Design: 1/5, there's no dialogue between the characters, and if they have it's short.. I don't even know how close the relationship does she have with her parents... World Background: 1/5,