Reviews of Legacy: Lord Alba
Legacy: Lord Alba
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I love the novel so far the only complaint is that when it comes spelling and grammar. Other than that it's a very good novel. The main issue is when it says he it is supposed to she and vice versa.
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Story and concept is fine; however, there are a few questionable things. Firstly, grammar has been pretty poor after losing editor, but I get that so I can't complain there. Additionally, the MC seems to have the wrong focusses and some of his thoughts are skewed. Finally, the maid is totally out of hand. I'd say that's fine because the MC made himself equal with her. However, she is still the maid, she should not act like she does.
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I'm in 75 chapters and the story is good! There's immersion issues, part of that is the world building and the other half is written issues. There's a lot of changes in the sex of main character, I don't mean sexy time or gender Bender... More like character is a guy but then saying she looked this way or that way... If you can get over the confusion and just read for the story itself you might like this. There's technology changes between advanced countries and poor countries though so that can be a bit... Jarring. Good story, not for everyone, but I am enjoying and recommend this.
I actually haven't read more than half the first chapter. I just need to say: Look up how to use f*cking punctuation! Did you not go to school? Even if you didn't, I see mention of an editor. How do neither of you know how to write dialogue?! Did you never read a book before?! It's literally in all of them! Why are you writing everything so weird? It's distracting from the story, which I would otherwise definitely be immersed in right now.
This is just my opinion, I hope you still read this novel even though I will not become this is not meant for everyone. I really had high hope for this novel but in the end it was disappointing. The character are literally dump such as his mother maid or his king father. It will make you so mad that you wish you could go inside this novel and kill everyone including mc. O right all of mc sisters and their mothers are pure hearted girl who is a good girls with no bad intention but while all mc bothers and their mothers are the bad guys. Mc king father is the dumbest character in this novel in my opinion. This novel would be super good if it remade. I’m not just going to say bad thing because this novel is actually good but character just turn you off. It is annoying. I know some people will love this novel and will able to past the some annoying character but I can’t. I still recommend you to try before saying anything and I try my best to stay but this novel was not meant for me.
This is one of the worst books I have every read, the writing is very bad, the story line is very mixed up as if trying to join 100 different cultivation novels together, which makes this book all originality, I genuinely don't see how this booked is allowed on this platform. Worst book I have read so far in the past 10 years.
