Review Detail of aoenstar in Legacy: Lord Alba

Story and concept is fine; however, there are a few questionable things. Firstly, grammar has been pretty poor after losing editor, but I get that so I can't complain there. Additionally, the MC seems to have the wrong focusses and some of his thoughts are skewed. Finally, the maid is totally out of hand. I'd say that's fine because the MC made himself equal with her. However, she is still the maid, she should not act like she does.