Juugo Uzumaki

Really good even if I always hope for pre-canon era as it allow more liberties in the plot. I hope at last it will become AU at some point.

Trully nicely done, but the main problem is the hardnes of reading throu the first chapters, its like it was written by someone mentally ill (Times all over the place the ways the sentences are placed together and etc.), im not talking about story but about quality of writing (mtl compared to that is sometimes like a walk in park)

Pretty nice. A writing style you rarely find on this platform, though needs some work. Character driven. Slow paced. Overall, I'd recommend giving it a try. It's a good read.

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The story is boring, nothing interesting happens in more than 20 chapters. If it weren't for the fact that they occasionally talk about kekkai genaki or the like, one wouldn't believe they're in the world of Naruto.

Not bad, Enjoying the beginning and hoping to love the rest of it as I go. I'm hoping to see How far this story goes. Your doing a great job author.