As Author I give myself 5 ⭐️.
I am just a newbie author trying to improve his english and this is my first book, so don’t expect to be perfect.
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Good job although the story didn't start yet everything so far was good hope it continues this way
Ps: please don't Make a harem it kind of everywhere -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
1.Too many abilities for the first chapters 2.There are too many strong abilities It is better to keep Telos karma at the beginning and then you could give him more abilities and powers 3.The abilities and powers are not in balance with the DxD's power scale in the beginning
I had read it and this give me a feeling of... Emptiness?... Like half the chapter I read is something completely not related to fanfic at all.. And the image, I hope you could just repost the image in comment section. Most that use phone can't click it mate.
beta mc................................. I hate beta mc.......................................................................................................
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I am the A of my B
C are my body and D is my blood
I have E over a thousand F
Unknown to n, nor known -n
Have withstood ? to create many F
Yet those W will never be X Y
So, as I Z...
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Just someone who pass by a fanfic novel... congratz you just reveive 5 star servant... Anyway hope you make a good fanfic... and also have a good story as well.
For now it’s pretty good the Writing quality is nice. I love the skill , original choice . The world background seems ok ( remember when Im writing this they are only 4 chapter ).
We still dont know how the MC looks like but i can wait .
So if I do a summary it’s a nice and promising story .