Review Detail of Yuri_yuri in Just a Random Reincarnation

Item: Just a Random Reincarnation
Rating: 3.8

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Yuri_yuriLv43yrYuri_yuri

1.Too many abilities for the first chapters 2.There are too many strong abilities It is better to keep Telos karma at the beginning and then you could give him more abilities and powers 3.The abilities and powers are not in balance with the DxD's power scale in the beginning

Just a Random Reincarnation

Heartless1190

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Heartless1190AuthorHeartless1190

Well, I won't deny that but this is the beginning and I will use less the system/gain abilities in the future (I think) I know it is unbalanced but yeah :v Thanks for the review, I will try to improve

3yr

Yuri_yuriLv4Yuri_yuri

I think the scorching sun skill should be changed to something that is more related to telos karma. It also gives you a weakness so that no matter how powerful you are, you always have a chance to lose. Also, don't do a lot of time jumps, it would be better to have a few chapters if you are a kid.

Heartless1190:Well, I won't deny that but this is the beginning and I will use less the system/gain abilities in the future (I think) I know it is unbalanced but yeah :v Thanks for the review, I will try to improve

3yr

Heartless1190AuthorHeartless1190

I have a plan for scorching sun in future btw And thanks for the advise

Yuri_yuri:I think the scorching sun skill should be changed to something that is more related to telos karma. It also gives you a weakness so that no matter how powerful you are, you always have a chance to lose. Also, don't do a lot of time jumps, it would be better to have a few chapters if you are a kid.

3yr