Haru_Toujo
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and here I am, awaiting raiden's rerun for another 48 hours : ))) and boy oh boy am I gonna ignore Raiden's banner and get the bobba man himself, Ayato! :D
man, the previous sentences make it seem like it was hinting that the game they'd be playing is just child abuse...
now this is just plain stupid >_>
I thank you from the bottom of my heart. This introduction is legendary.
hey bro, you should do like a treasure hunt arc, or like, just any arc really. the novels getting kinda boring, nothing's really happening at the moment so it'd be entertaining if you do like an adventuring arc or any other ark like I typed before.
hey author, I wanna recommend you to read this authors work 'cupcakeninja', I think you'll learn alot if you do, the site he's posting is on scribblehub.com, for my personal favorite is "My sister the villainess" don't get fooled by the title, this is one of the most epic novel I've read so far.... so, yeah. just wanna tell you this, you might learn a thing or twođ§
tbh with you, after reading the first few pages this story has to offer... it's not good, the word 'after' is being used over and over again like there's no tomorrow, the next second I noticed that, I immediately dropped this. by just seeing that the word ''after" is being overly used, it tells me that the author's vocabulary isn't that large. well, that's all, I do respect you for still updating, compared to me that drops whatever I'm writing when I get bored, so yeah, this is my review.
Suzuki Akane
Suzuki Haruto
cmon, just take momiji as well....