Writing is good, stability is medium Story, Character, World is bad if you turn off your brain, and read without thinking about plot, isekai, or wtf is you reading , is a good ff. if any of these points above its bad for you, dont read

really good, its just that still no there yet. timeline its all over the place ( contruct 8 houses less than 10 days , Train a army of 100+ soldies less ta 15 days , if it continue in this pace, he will construct a whole city in 30 ) < < < that without any supernatural power . the history can be refined to be really good, its just not there yet.

yey another crackfic, Mc 5 Years old ... Another ash ( Pokemon ) , doenst grow up :....................................................................

Nice fic, almost everything was (or is ) good, only problem that for me its, i like one piece, like really a lot, so i cant see a mc better than luffy, its not that a inteligent luffy its better, if you make a OC . was better but good fic

well, the translation is good , not many errors, you did a good job. its just you picked a worthless ff. its bad, really, its really anoying. the MC is useless, the system gives him everything, i like novels with OP Mc, but here is OP system and Useless mc. i know its hard to find ff good on chinese site, dont give up , its just the fanfiction you choose to translate its really bad

its unexpectedly good, like really good. i came with really low expectation. theres really everything to goes wrong here. why ? well from my perspective, a one piece fic without romance tag normaly the mc is a psyco when tag harem its normaly a idiot with single digit QI, so i though that > CN fic + no tag romance + game with other players = everything to go wrong, and like the cn novels says i got faceslape on myself. its really good novel, mc is a normal person ( doenst suffer from mental problems like 90% of other fics of one piece ) Sigmarc, Good work finding that . and good work on translation

good fanfic, almost everything is good BUUUT .... you have to read 10 to 15 chaps to get any useful information relevant to the plot , on start was funny but later get a little anoying , like you read a smut novel where all chaps are same s3x scene but with diferent name for the female 4.6 stars just not 5 because theres too little story development on chap 579 and time doenst develop. if you dont want rush the manga that he's painting there give a year and start with anime, then back with manga, continue that cicle and maybe there will be a story development

The translation its really good. its just that 39 chaps , the progress of the history its 3 days , maybe later get better but until now its really slow, and i still dont know how the mc look like the low star its only because character and world background

agreed, too much pov from people around, and the history doenst progress. its not bad, just doenst understand why its 5º ranked, theres some others much better unranked

err, look i read 10 chaps max, its not thats bad i just me. i gave 5 star because i cant give 1 for personal opnion , Author you are brave , Tachibana Hent... its just too much psicological dmg for me to see it from your eyes.

Writing quality is good Stability not so good, Story 0 theres no story development Character design , urgh world background, ( the wolrd is his house and school ) First , its not that is bad fic, just the mc personalitie its a trash , some fics its a adult on a child body , in this novel is a child on a adult body, the system its there only to justify the power up , the mc doesnt get strong , all fights ( even raynare ) he barely win ( still win but urgh ) 90 % of the fic theres no human interaction , its just him in his thoughts theres more problems but in resume, the idea was good, but the mc fked everything, ( Theres alot fics with good idea but with a idiot mc , even famous novels like , Naruto , Bleach , Hary potter etc) <--- My opnion for good wolrd with a lot hitory , but a fked mc

its good, easy to read, not many erros ( He,She,Her,Him ) its just that he's not learning from Bang, while traveling he could learn something , i know a week cant learn anything but can be a good start.

its really bad, almost unreadable. i'm sorry but i dont have the talent MTL reader. everyone reactions is robotic......................................

its a good fic. a little anoying with the format text ( the way they speak etc) therers just a little problem. Sona character its a little off ( a lot ) Summon characters are brainwashed ( Just puppets ) yubellana ( Puppet ) i read till the exorcists , Xenovia and irina ( Puppet) the major problem its theres no emotion , its boring

on start was good, but when the history progress, the translation become lazy , you have to re-read to understand, theres too much chinese sayings if you are too lazy to do a decent translation its better stop and dont lose your time,