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I can't give an accurate description for I've only read fifteen chapters so far, which is the amount currently available. I've noticed that there are many grammatical mistakes and I've found myself very confused. I don't know if there was supposed to be a mystery element to it, but I was confused nevertheless. This story had potential however and I would like to see it prosper. If the grammatical mistakes can be fixed then this story will be at its best. I wish great luck to the author, this is good work, you nice keep going!