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Jujutsu kaisen : Dust release

Author: New_ring
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What will happen when someone lives the life of onoki in the naruto world get reincarnated into the world of jujutsu kaisen , so guys this my first time writing a storie like this and English is not my first language so i need any help there is .

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FakerTomat0
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I truly desire to give this a better review, However with the lack of understanding on basic mechanics and how things work in the JJK verse to a high degree, I sadly am forced to give a low review. It is very fixable however, It just comes to scaling better and gaining a better understanding. Dust release simply would work in JJK if it was scaled properly and was integrated better. Good work however author.

_DEKIM_
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In my opinion it is meh.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

batman3251
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Up to the 7 chapters (which is the current chapter released), the author is consistent with his updates. The story is unique and the writing quality is also good with fluent conversations between characters. Good luck Author, and Don't DROP.

Azra_El
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great potential

LT_Ryuu_X
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MkGod
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So far, I enjoy it. The only thing I don't like is that the Mc has 2 cursed techniques. After the inventory arc, I thought the author would just timeskip to Canon, but he mentioned reviving the kamizuru clan, so I'm looking forward to that. I hope the author makes gojo and gets enemies with the Mc.

Victor_7740
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This has great potential tho it is too short to tell. But still I have high expectation for this so here’s my 3 power stones

CouchPotatoDandy
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At first I was concerned when I read this was a story about a person reincarnating for the second time.(the first time was in Naruto world where he lived for 80 years already) So I know there wasn't going to be a lot of character development since he is already old enough. But what would you know, with an excellent grammar and a good plot, the story was done excellently. The MC mentality in actions stayed true to what was portrayed for the all story. The MC was cold hearted and never spared his enemies whatever they are children or adults. And I honestly loved it. Now all that is left is to hope that the author would not drop this.

glarodriguez
glarodriguezLv1glarodriguez

No era lo que esperaba y no me gustó el comienzo y la explicación, hubiera estado mejor si simplemente reencarnaba con las técnicas de onoki, tampoco me gusta su personalidad y todo se sintió muy acelerado y vacio

Orechunchik
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TeuPai
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Xela_1603
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I'm not good at writing, so here is how I liked the story so far in smileys 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

Danilo_sr
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a well written story, interesting character, it would be interesting if we knew more about his past in the ninja world and what he change in there

Jake_Romanos
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love it when the recount his memories from when he was in naruto world

Bonbonbla
BonbonblaLv4Bonbonbla

it's a good start, I'm expecting great character writing and development

Lucas_Otaku
Lucas_OtakuLv1Lucas_Otaku

(PT-BR) No geral a história está boa e está caminhando pra um rumo ainda melhor, só precisa melhorar um pouco no tempo de atualização pra não me deixar esperando, vou dar uma pedra de poder pra motivar, fique honrado pois é um pouco complicado eu ganhar uma pedra de poder.

Atalyn_Navia
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I can say this is a good story, the stability in updating the chapters is also quite stable, I have read several chapters and it is good. but I also don't like how the author made mistakes in writing the character's names from the name of the main character, and the names of other characters whose writing does not match the character's real name. And also I can say that sometimes the character's name is written as a stereotypical Japanese name (I'm not sure if this is the right way to describe it) Overall this is a good story, and it would be even better if the author improved the way you wrote the characters' names.

Egi_Hidayatullah
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Hmmmm... Gonna read This when chap 40 more i Guess..[img=update][img=recommend]don't drop this....................._______________________________________________________

HolyDK
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Good fanfiction just more chapter №###№##############№###########################################################€€€€€€###########################################################

orangegummy
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