I truly desire to give this a better review, However with the lack of understanding on basic mechanics and how things work in the JJK verse to a high degree, I sadly am forced to give a low review. It is very fixable however, It just comes to scaling better and gaining a better understanding. Dust release simply would work in JJK if it was scaled properly and was integrated better. Good work however author.
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LIKEUpdate review, The story sadly hasn't gotten better, nor does the author truly care for the basics of JJK as a whole. Although information about stuff in JJK is wonky, it's still explainable by math, physics and base knowledge. I hope the author reads this so they can understand what needs to be done to fix it. You got this dude and or dudette