Reviews of Invincible's Twin

Harem or no harem? His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy There's vomit on his sweater already: Mom's spaghetti He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready To drop bombs, but he keeps on forgetting What he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out He's choking, how? Everybody's joking now The clock's run out, time's up, over, blaow! Snap back to reality

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Giving up on all Invincible fics after this, most of them are written to be "Gary Stu wants to suck off Invincible and have teenage drama", it quickly got boring but qith the amount of fake 5 star reviews that get spammed as soon as the first chapter dropa on this site/app, then stories like this end up with more than 4 stars

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Love your kiri fic and I've read that so long ago. And today I was like is there any invincible fics and bam! Your just popped off when I searched invincible thank you for writing this

this is one of the little times that I don't know what I will say about a novel more than good, so good job author I can't wait for more chapters

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Great novel[img=recommend] Would have loved it if you really completed the novel.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

THIS is gold i couldn't stop until I was finished this story was wonderful please give us more or at least a sequel to this masterpiece of a book

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Calidad de la escritura (4/5); Estabilidad de las actualizaciones (1/5); Desarrollo de la historia (4/5); Diseño de personaje (5/5); Fondo mundial (5/5). *Por desgracia, el autor, abandono esta historia en el capitulo 26, en lo personal me parece EL MEJOR FANFIC vasado en INVENCIBLE (comic). Si buscas un fanfic de INVENCIBLE con profundidad, realismo y sin ser una copia de la versión animada, te lo recomiendo encarecidamente.

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I like this book so much that is would like to put the author in a room and make him write it all. dhxhbdbdhxhxbxbdbbdbdhdhdhdbdbbdbdbdhehd

I really can't wait for the Omni man vs invincible but with another person .................................................................

this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.