It's a great story with compelling storytelling, but some parts just seem random. Especially the alien recruitment scene. Ed literally should not have had enough time to do intergalactic politics or relief aid while building his organization. The time frame is too short and Ed’s life is on a timer. Other than that the story flows well,

Steve doesn’t have a tyranitar. He has a metagross

Thx for the chapter

This is a little sus

No harem please

I personally wouldn't like it. But if written logically it would be acceptable. I think that the dragon doesn't need to breathe because they live off mana.

1, but later Hades learned enough alchemy to betray his partner right after creating the philosopher's stone. Hades has no starting point and would have ignorantly damaged his body if he learned about it himself like how Edward and his brother. If you decide to leave it as it is I would recommend that Hades has some kind of lasting injury during his study of Ren's alchemy notes like a mechanical arm/leg that is not affected by Hades' own philosopher stone. It would give Hades motivation to seek Ren to reverse his ailment.

May his soul rest in peace.

Great chapter. But which electric Pokemon will he get? I'm assuming that he needs one for the generators.

So suspicious

Not going to lie, this whole arc still confuses me, but I have been enjoying the parts I understood.

Great story told in multiple POVs that are fun and engaging. I especially like Kia's point of view and powers. The story is written really well and flows smoothly.

That's why you need the crafter class

Great chapter and arc. Just hope that this quality will continue.