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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY2d
    Commented

    you forgot to put the words go to in the sentence

    "Ugh!" Jean groaned as she lay her face down on her desk. "Why must we school?"
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    Heart of the Universe
    Anime & Comics · Cryobear
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY2d
    Commented

    can you use meters

    Everyone could hear the sound of a thunder clap. Mr. Aizawa hold out the phone and shows the result, it was 1.6 kilometers (one mile).
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    Lightning Human in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Kerolos_Hanna
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY2d
    Commented

    you should have the Mc summon poison ivy to help with the fruits and plants

    Ch 57 Chapter 57: Planning
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    One Piece : Kingdom Building System
    Anime & Comics · Arsone
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY2d
    Commented

    it's toru not tohru

    "Me too." said Tohru, who was invisible, minus the floating clothes.
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    Wild Card In MHA
    Anime & Comics · RubberPeen
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY3d
    Commented

    you need to edit your chapters to fix your grammar mistakes

    Ch 2 Greatest
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    Danny phantom but a crossover
    Anime & Comics · Tae_Jennings_7356
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY3d
    Commented

    take out "you what" for "whatever help you sleep at night" cuz you said whatever you what help sleep at night

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    Danny phantom but a crossover
    Anime & Comics · Tae_Jennings_7356
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY3d
    Commented

    it's well Sam not we sam

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    Danny phantom but a crossover
    Anime & Comics · Tae_Jennings_7356
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY3d
    Commented

    it shaked and staring not shacked and starting

    "Hey Danny can you help with Sam I was talking to her but she won't respond she seems frozen I already shacked her still no response," said tucker he wasn't lying she was frozen "Sam you ok you been starting for a long," I said as I started snapping my fingers in her face as she finally started to respond "huh yeah Danny whatever you say I believe" she almost screamed as she snapped out her trance
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    Danny phantom but a crossover
    Anime & Comics · Tae_Jennings_7356
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY3d
    Commented

    which aliens?

    There are at least 10 aliens in the Omnitrix that far surpass anything Alien X can do
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    In Marvel as Superman
    Anime & Comics · DarkHelixDragoon24
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY4d
    Commented

    why a spear? I thought it was going to be a sword.

    Then, he turned to the spear, grabbing it tightly. "Spear of Eternity."
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    Marvel : Eternal Blazing Sun
    Movies · Eren_fraser
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY7d
    Commented

    why him?

    'okay for my first wish I wish for the powers, abilities and race of Barragan Luisenbarn.'
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    MHA: King of Hollows
    Martial Arts · Jordan_Kitchens
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY7d
    Commented

    he not she

    Karna narrowed her eyes when she couldn't get any information about this Heroic Spirit, but she didn't care much about that.
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    High School DxD: The Most Powerful
    Anime & Comics · BrilliantDream
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY7d
    Commented

    her servant not his

    Shirou only gave an embarrassed smile, "Two of our servants, Rider and Archer ended up meeting Ruler and his servant and ended up having a little fight, they mistook him for the enemy"
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    High School DxD: The Most Powerful
    Anime & Comics · BrilliantDream
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY7d
    Commented

    why the matrix. why not the industrial replicator, or the replicator, or bio-matter resequencer

    [Congratulations, you have obtained the technology from "The Matrix" - Matrix World]
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    Transmigrated With A Movie Tech System
    Movies · Novelette_Seeker
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY8d
    Commented

    harem or black cat

    Ch 4 Info
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    Marvel: I'm The Smartest And I'll Never Lose
    Movies · Whatthecheese3
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY8d
    Commented

    what is his divinity ?

    Ch 4 Chapter four
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    The Awakening of The Celestial
    Anime & Comics · JafarSenpai
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY8d
    Commented

    seem weak. just give him reactive adaptation

    Space Adaptation that's your mutant ability; that's a pretty good cheat. Said Ancient One
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    The Awakening of The Celestial
    Anime & Comics · JafarSenpai
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY8d
    Commented

    it fell in love

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    Reincarnated in Marvel: My Cheat is OP
    Anime & Comics · 30Degree
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY8d
    Commented

    I feel bad for Diana. can you have Kara share shallot with her

    Ch 61 Tests
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    Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
    Anime & Comics · Draugzel
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  • JOKER_JAY
    JOKER_JAY8d
    Replied to ThatGuardianGuy

    the author has a problem writing the correct pronouns sometimes

    Mordred, meanwhile, under his helmet had a surprised and thoughtful look on his face, wondering what kind of Servant this Saber would be.
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    High School DxD: The Most Powerful
    Anime & Comics · BrilliantDream
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