GodonAHill
One of the best web novels I've seen on this site. If you can, please add imperial units in a bracket, too tiring to check them each and every time. Other than that; Writing Quality: Need a little fixing but it is understandable and clear. It is better than most. I can vouch for it. Stability of Updates: No need to say anything on this one. Story Development: So far, amazing! I am eager to kidnap the author to force him to write more, so yeah. Character Desing: Splendid. There are tons of characters, each of them unique and their relations are well designed. My only concern is for the author to forget a few among too many. I hope the author can use all of them accordingly. World Background: Sounds generic at first, but it gets much better as one reads. There is an overused base there, but the author constructed the building amazingly. Thanks for the good novel, please do not drop!
I got hooked by the synopsis. It was quite intriguing and interesting at how the author creates a scenario, making a reader wanting to know more of what happens next. The way the author writes and how he describes each characters' personalities and more is very nice. Its like you know these characters too well and you can easily imagine them in your mind. And in terms of updates, I know for sure that the author doesn't disappoint his readers with the stability of updates since he does have 300 chapters already in hand. I don't need to explain about the story development, character design and world background, do I? Since I've already explained why I would give these a 5* rate. For the new readers, you wouldn't be disappointed by this novel. Hope you enjoy it as much as I do!
*Sorry for my English* I'm really liking this novel. It's actually one of my favorites that I'm reading right now. Even though it takes a lot of concepts and ideas from Super Gene, I'm OK with that. The MC is pretty smart and he is not soft but not emotionless and merciless either. Also I like the relationship between Coin and MC. Power system looked pretty simple at first. Everyone has some unique superpowers, some martial arts but it looks like there is gonna be some big changes in F-circle and I'm looking forward to it. Side characters are cool too. I like that MCs family is important for the plot and they are not just some normal, powerless people. Some characters are funny and cool even though there are some typical "young masters" who can be a little bit annoying sometimes. Looking forward to romance part (There is romance tag). Hope it's not harem. The only thing that I am afraid of is that MC will get too OP like in Super Gene (my opinion). MC was multiple times stronger than people that were supposed to be one the same level and I didn't like it. Miles has a potential to become too OP, but I hope he won't since I like rivalry and fights between humans and not only monsters. Also I like when MC has friends who can fight alongside with him and not be just burden whose main purpose is to just praise the MC and talk how cool he is and how fast he progress. But it's not my story so yeah. Keep up the good work.
Alright, I guess I will review again. The novel is fine and dandy, but the publish rate it awfully low. I am not saying you SHOULD publish more, but it would have been nice if there were a chapter a day at least. Though, your stability of update is well, stable at least. Other than that, it is going good. The characters are well thought, the powers are well designed and world is based on some serious thinking, so good job author, keep up the good work.
I like it, so far. 180+ chapters in. I like portal-world settings. The characters are fine. except the villain is irritating. (Even villains should have some appeal. But this one does not, imo). The premise of the story is not that unique, but i don’t that, if the story is interesting. The magic system is a bit different, but not too. The pacing is slower than I like. But i am glad that the MC is not too OP. And i appreciate that the story is not behind a paywall. Overall, I hope the writer keeps expanding the story.
Ch70: Story is interesting to say at least. The world is not unique, and the power system is kinda similar to other novel or comics, but the way it is formed is nothing I have seen before. I mean there are superpowers okay, there are things make body and mind stronger, okay and there is that thing called energy unrelated but related to everything, the heck? All in all, it is interesting. I would recommend you to give it a go! And please increase the chappies.
While the story and characters are well written, this is clearly just a rewrite of Super Gene in many ways. Monster world is almost exactly the same but with new names, literally names his AI after the alter ego of supergenes’ MC. While this novel is good I can’t give it a higher rating because so much of it is clearly based off/ ripped out of Super Gene.
For me The story was so good so far but i want some spoiler, I want to ask, if the mc successfully awakened his super power? Because i think it's getting slower, I've already ready up to 60+ chap but he's not even trying that hard to awakened his power (You know something like being persistent and want to prove that he deserves that last name of his.
It seems like a good novel however sometimes i have a hard time following the story. Some stuff happens but there is no apparent connection to the following parts so its kinda confusing. I dont know if all the things are gonna be expressed as the story progresses but other than that the character designs and the world building is good
just a quick reminder. i already read until ch 20's and somehow your story closely resemble novel Super Gene. from world setting, equipment, main behavior, world mechanics, conflict, and some more. i know you prepare this novel for quite some time but maybe you can check the novel i mention and try to not really closely resembles that . i will support you and still reading but sadly i kind of like having a picture where the story goes next
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