One of the best web novels I've seen on this site. If you can, please add imperial units in a bracket, too tiring to check them each and every time. Other than that; Writing Quality: Need a little fixing but it is understandable and clear. It is better than most. I can vouch for it. Stability of Updates: No need to say anything on this one. Story Development: So far, amazing! I am eager to kidnap the author to force him to write more, so yeah. Character Desing: Splendid. There are tons of characters, each of them unique and their relations are well designed. My only concern is for the author to forget a few among too many. I hope the author can use all of them accordingly. World Background: Sounds generic at first, but it gets much better as one reads. There is an overused base there, but the author constructed the building amazingly. Thanks for the good novel, please do not drop!
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