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GodonAHill1yrReplied to TheAncientOnellThank you. I try me hardest đ
"You are different. You are the worst of the worse." Milosh's straightforward words hit Miles like a speeding train, but he ignored them. "You do not possess an attribute at all. You also don't have a superpower and you only have physical power. I accept that you are better than anyone I have seen when it comes to physical powers, but that will not cut it at all.- GodonAHill1yrReplied to Forst_LostCh 55 Shoot the Works!
- GodonAHill1yrReplied to Forst_LostCh 55 Shoot the Works!
- GodonAHill1yrReplied to The_Crimson_Abyss
Selfishness leads to a life of self. Sometimes, you have to share goodies to grow up together with people around you to have a better life although it might hinder you at first.
When he was forced to the edge of the cliff and was about to fall down, he forcefully grabbed the rock and saved himself from falling. He stood there and planned his next move. He couldn't climb up once again, or Tian Ling would try to kill him once again, but he couldn't go down either. The cliff was too steep to climb down. He waited there then got a brilliant idea. He discussed it with Coin, and Coin agreed to it too. - GodonAHill1yrReplied to The_Crimson_Abyss
Das fine, no need to feel sorry. Thanks for explaining.
"Um, okay." Miles thought to himself. 'What should I name her?' He thought to himself. "Rayen it is then!" He answered after pondering for more than ten minutes. - GodonAHill1yrReplied to The_Crimson_Abyss
We all been there, no need to feel embarrassed. They do have the appeal when you first start them, but over time, đ¤˘
"Brother Frog is stupid, he can't live with his half body." - GodonAHill1yrReplied to The_Crimson_Abyss
Because of the cuss word, the comment cannot be seen so don't know where you commented this on, but welp, if you are asking the name Rayen, no it is not a Chinese name. Also I mentioned it many times but they are all scattered, but anyways can go another time. All the chinese cliche's in this novel are kind of an author way of critic. I am not fan either.
"Um, okay." Miles thought to himself. 'What should I name her?' He thought to himself. "Rayen it is then!" He answered after pondering for more than ten minutes. - GodonAHill1yrReplied to The_Crimson_Abyss
To his friend? They are rare breed you know. Gotta appreciate good friends.
When he was forced to the edge of the cliff and was about to fall down, he forcefully grabbed the rock and saved himself from falling. He stood there and planned his next move. He couldn't climb up once again, or Tian Ling would try to kill him once again, but he couldn't go down either. The cliff was too steep to climb down. He waited there then got a brilliant idea. He discussed it with Coin, and Coin agreed to it too. - GodonAHill1yrReplied to The_Crimson_Abyss
If I am not mistaken, what you have is Wuxia Overexposure. Reading too much Chinese novel poisoned you and now you see young masters everywhere. Though gotta admit Wuxia novels over used this template and ruined it.
"Brother Frog is stupid, he can't live with his half body." - GodonAHill1yrReplied to Filippo_GalassiCh 307 Three Layered Plan
- GodonAHill2yrReplied to Steven_Santo_5788Ch 259 The Real Marooner?
- GodonAHill2yrReplied to captainawesome
That is called "Hamartia," character flaw. It is a technique used since ancient greek. All of Shakespeare character has one as well. I don't mind constructive criticism but outright insulting irritates me. I could have just place Miles in there as well, it is not that difficult believe me, but this is planned. So please either be respectful or take your leave.
When he entered, the five looked at him. For a second, Miles felt hostility, but he shrugged it off as his imagination, but he still had his guard up. He walked to the side of Cody and waited. - GodonAHill2yrReplied to Virgin_LoliCh 26 Starve Cleric
- GodonAHill2yrReplied to omeroford
They do not conflict but each art has compatibility with one of the four branches, making it miss match for others. Since Miles sees himself closer to Body Branch, he thinks alien's art is perfect match for him.
At the first level, it is still fine, but starting from F-Tier, when I circulate energy, arts are going to be at odds. Still, if I have to go with Body Branch, Exaltedness of the Creator and Moon Essence wouldn't suit it. If I have to name them, Seven Finger Death Punch is more suitable for the Body, while Moon Essence is for the Mind Branch. For Heart, Cross has Royal Blood Art that I refused to practice before because of Grandpa, but my talk with father changed my opinion. Exaltedness of the Creator on the other hand fits the mystic branch perfectly. - GodonAHill2yrReplied to nPhake
Hi, thanks for the review. First of all, no harem. Definitely not! And there will be romance, I promise. About the power balance, I assure you that, MC will not be OP. He will have edge but not because of some bestowed power, but thanks to his wit and ability to make use of his abilities. But compared to his peers, the distance will never be too far. The energy system in F-Circle will make the story much more interesting. Please keep on supporting me and have fun.
- GodonAHill2yrReplied to AshKing_007
And a strong superpower. Life is unfair.
"Thank you for showing mercy." Miles thanked and rose to leave.