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They're like billionaire success story waiting to happen had they focused on their business activities instead of their criminal jobs.

He's still fairly normal up to this point. Not a saint like the real Peter Parker but not straight up villainous either. Just don't force the development to evilness and you're good to go. Like seriously, selfishness/greed and the rest of the 7 sins are pretty much human, just don't force the evil stuffs for the sake of being edgy, please, I beg you.

Yeah, though it fits the world. This looks like one of those villain encounters from animes catered to children. But it may feel a bit out of place for this story in particular due to the age up, which kinda puts people's expectations away from shounen and more into seinen.

Wow, what a review from someone who have only read up to the first chapter. Did you review a pokemon story from your dream or something?

Some play it well and actually make it logical and acceptable, but most execute it badly, so might as well take it off the equation in its entirely.

This is looking more and more like a story written by an adolescent or maybe an AI. I thought it was a translation of a CN fanfic but this is waaaaay too illogical for that. CN fanfics may be filled with unhinged patriotism and racial remarks, but most of what I've read capture the behind the scenes politics and "what to do and not to do" very well, this one though? Logic thrown out the window.

Wtf is even happening anymore, the story is becoming more and more incoherent as chapters passes.

"Edited" but Raven is suddenly here. Where's the proper continuity? It was still bearable before but why this another sudden drop in quality?