Andry_Reyes
aright!!! time for this one's most honest review!. First, the title surely caught me--how can it not be--it was detailed enough to be able to haha. Second--- including some philosophy or the whatnots in novels are too underrated to most popular ones but I love it!! so yep yep I'm in. (one novel that talks about several things like this is I'll Show You a Villain, so I got hooked with it too) Third! Oh I love Miles hahaha, come on we all love laidback characters---cant be so sure on the later chapters but he is on the early start so Id say it nonetheless. All in all, your writing although not perfect (cause no ones perfect >•>) attracted me to continue reading, although the occasional overthinking of this guy could be tiresome enough to make me sigh--only a little. In simpler terms, Please give us moreeeeee!!
The start is a little bit slow, but over time, it keeps better and better. The storyline might not be a forte of some readers, but overall, I like it. The pacing is quite good actually, better than some of the stories I've read so far. Anyway, give the novel a try, the book has more than it can offer.
I envy your writing style it was so good! There were times when you switched to present tense from past tense that left me confused but besides that everything was amazing. I'll add it to my library and probably read it on my free time, I think? Miles was such a great character I love how he could touch me with his emotions! Highly recommend!
On the surface, it's just a story about two idiots, but really it's about two broken teens. It's a really great work for the author to be able to write something like that. Yes, there are occasional moments of silliness but it doesn't take away from the story, and in fact, adds to it. The writing style is good, a little improvement would be nice, but the story is still nice as it is, it doesn't particularly hinder the enjoyment you can get out of it. If the author keeps it up, I might become an avid reader! o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ