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A ghost? A writer? Maybe, a ghostwriter? Haha. Kidding aside, I am a newbie writer/editor/proofreader. If anyone is interested to work with me, feel free to add me on Discord, Yrros#5946 .

2021-04-12 JoinedPhilippines
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  • yrros
    yrros2yr
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    Just from the synopsis alone, I could tell that this story is unique and different from what I usually read here on Webnovel. What sort of individual must B. Alpha be to proclaim himself as a god? To think that a robot, an immortal robot at that, had also prayed to a god at one point in his life, and now he wants to be a god himself. It makes one wonder what could he have possiblity gone through to affirm his resolve to take on such a big role. Keeping these speculations in mind, I started to read the novel, taking a free ride towards this dystopian world the author has offered to us. But of course, I shan't give any spoilers. Enjoy the novel as you are discovering its wonders yourself. ;) Onto my review, first and foremost, I would like to commend the author for having the courage to share their written work to the rest of the world. As I believe every writer has their own authorial style, I will try to appreciate the novel using a reader's lenses. Quality-wise, I can say that the novel is good. The choice of words, the grammar, the storytelling, the descriptions... They are all satisfactory. I especially like the author's depiction of imagery. On another note, I believe there is always a room for improvement. I would like to mention here the dialogues; there are times I think they're too much. Leaving that for now, the story development is panning out quite nicely, though a little baffling. This, however, is probably because of my limited exposure to this genre and my diminutive knowledge of this world's lore. I hope to read more about this dystopian world in the future updates. From the very first chapter, the author introduced to us quite a number of characters. If I may say, some characters are memorable and distinct, some just are not. I hope that the author can give us more details about the characters, especially the main cast. Showing their significance to the plot at the early onset may prove to be beneficial in the later developments of the plot. With that said, I would like to pick up the dialogue discussion here: if possible, it should be made clear who is speaking what to avoid confusion. Adding an air of mystery is good but too much of it can confuse the readers instead. But I must commend, the dialogues are realistic and diverse. Good job! Based on the app's stats, the average release rate of this novel is 5 chapters a week. That's great for an original work! Thanks for the hard work, author! To conclude, I recommend this novel to all those who are fans of dystopian novels and to those fellow daoists who want to give this genre a try. It offers a unique feel, completely different from the usual wuxia and xianxia stories here on Webnovel. I'm sure you'll not regret reading this. Enjoy!

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    BENEATH THE SURFACE: RISE OF THE GOD
    Fantasy · KS_Loona
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  • yrros
    yrros2yr
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    The first thing I've noticed about this novel is its long title; it reminds me of those light novels with absurdly long titles, lol. Anywho, the title managed to pique my interest, with it capsulizing the essence of this novel. It makes one curious of what relation does writing a poem have with transmigration. This novel makes one realize the sonder of the world. There are great quotations from the author that give a sense of eloquence and depth to this novel as well. I rarely read novels with a first person narrative, so I don't deem myself knowledgeable about this writing style. However, this much I can say, this novel's narration is good. A little fast-paced or draggy at times, but all in all, good. There's always a room for improvement; never stop learning! ;) If I may suggest though, I believe adding dialogue tags will help clear confusions of who is saying which in the dialogues. The story provides a comedic relief while it tackles on tragic experiences the MC has to go through. I can say, the development of the plot has caught me unprepared. Losing his parents and transferring into a whole new environment... I sure do hope Miles can find happiness in this life full of bleakness. His character is someone I can relate with, and I hope he could overcome life struggles with the idiot by his side. :) Looking at the app's stats, I saw that this novel updates 8 chapters a week! That's quite the dedication, author! Keep up the good work! I am quite surprised when I see the update schedule, which will be updated by the author every week. I think it's nice, knowing there will be more to come at the promised times. Overall, it's a nice read! Enjoy!

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    I Wrote a Poem and Now I'm Stuck in Another World with an Idiot.
    Fantasy · Andry_Reyes
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