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As the author/ translator you should pay attention to your pronouns. Half the time I wonder "when did she start talking to a girl?" When in fact she's speaking to a male. Sometimes I forget that Gab is a boy because all the pronouns you use are feminine. The world building needs work and the grammar also needs working on. All in all its a good story. It's just a bit confusing sometimes with the errors
whoooo an isekai genre, I have read many isekai genre a numerous times, some are cliche, some are traditional or the trending ones, for this one it is very unexpected. I like how the MC wanted to be liberated to her bad ending and specially how u describe magic and battle scenes. It is very refreshing to see such detailed battle scene and world building of magic, tho I commented some paragraph with small error please do not mind. I am engrossed to your story that's why I saw those errors but overall this is a good story~ Looking forward how will you bring the bad end to a good one? Will it be cliche, traditional or will give you me surprise, I am very eager to find out~
Okay, I really Like the genee of rebirth and revenge and I personally think that this fits my style. But I really like this and I can’t help but keep wanting more. The MC is a very independent character, I admire her a lot and I wish she and her family can bond in this life time of her. Props the author, Thank you and Please keep updating😊