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Guys right now he really doesn't think of her as a wife. She's just a cute niece.
This girl. lol
omo this is why it's hard being nice.
and since you guys will just be waiting for handouts then it seems you're nothing worthy of our MoMo.. Seriously if you already know that your son won't inherit that sort of wealth then make sure he is capable of making his own. And so far he seems to be on the path of bootlicking and cozying up to others for benefits.
this comment is 2yrs old but come back and tell me what happened please
why shouldn't a man be responsible and reliable? So should they just be irresponsible, spend their lives at home with their family still taking care of them, not contributing and being a general burden?
he has to be a good tool in order to please his wife and mother in law. this currying favor
He won't dare to be angry at his mother in law.
How dare you. 'Relationships can't be forced'? Did they get engaged out of their own free? This engagement was forced to begin with, but you had nothing to say about it until they daughter of your affair showed. Disgusting. And I agree that relationships can't be forced but how dare you be hypocritical here. He didn't have to cheat. Of he was dissatisfied he could have gone for an annulment first. And the reason this failure of a father can be okay with the failure of a fiance is because at least he still wants to marry someone from their family. But I hope the heaven has compassion and make the illegitimate child someone else's child
Imperfections really matter to a lot of Asians. If one is too dark, has a scar, is too fat, is too short, has a disability of any sort. All of it matters too much. How they live like that I don't know. Where I live it's hard to find someone who is completely scar free. You must have fallen some time, climbed a tree and general tomfoolery as a child
I know your comment is like 2yrs old but still. Some parents, like my grandparents and my mom, are insane. They are all some kind of doctor and wanted to teach me science from early. By the time I was four and all the other babies were just learning to write, I was already misdiagnosing cancer
While he's cute I don't approve. I'm not sure I know what's going on here but is her father planning on marrying his child to this man? Someone she doesn't even remember? Who possibly did something bad to her? And how is this guy planning to marry her without her consent. Built a house for her and her future children? Does even know about those future children? No. Cause she doesn't even know about her future husband. He's adorable in some ways but this is not how you form a relationship especially when it already has baggage
As the author/ translator you should pay attention to your pronouns. Half the time I wonder "when did she start talking to a girl?" When in fact she's speaking to a male. Sometimes I forget that Gab is a boy because all the pronouns you use are feminine. The world building needs work and the grammar also needs working on. All in all its a good story. It's just a bit confusing sometimes with the errors