Splendora_Gaming
I like it,mc is kind of sage/monk like personality, he turns all the antagonist to his side by rescueing them before salem does. He doesnt choose a side between salem and cozpij but instead is grey In this story, cinder isnt a powerhungry monster but a smart level headed strong huntress in training. Ill be looking for more chapters author
I just wanted to make a comment on this novel. If it up here at least the author not a coward. If this comment not then doesn't matter because I still wanted to get this off my chest as the author still going to have to read this. I read up to the 3rd chapter as to give it a chance. His prologue is is good as it unique of the many just use truck-kun. His way he develops this particular book of his out of at least 5 books about jaune arc is extremely weird in a sense. Gave him 3 different powers and went ahead and just gave so many op ablilty with no training, memory transfer, or sacrifice. Even with such power he just destroys the timeline of RWBY before people become who they are. Didn't like his set-up, didn't like his approach on everything so I leave this here for you author at least to improve yourself.
I loved the start, it was a unique approach to reincarnating your MC. I get so sick of them meeting a god and having endless pointless questions or floating in a void and having a system be a sassy **** out of nowhere. There were a few dissapointing parts, like making the MC having 3 different power systems and abilities, and then nerfing them to merely 'useful' instead of OP. so the MC is still OP but not godlike OP as he should be with aura/chakra/reiatsu + tenseigan. next is the harem aspect and forcing it on him with the shadow clones going rogue. Didn't make much sense and was obviously forced. And a harem of more than 2 girls is always a bad choice because you cant devote the time needed to fully flesh out their character development. As it is all the MCs love interests seem inconsequential and shallow in this fic. Just there to prop Jaune up. But the main problem? I'm bored reading this. Nothing interesting happens. And the time something that could be interesting does, like the ambush? Still boring.
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