IcyReaperz
I am a person who loves to read. On here mainly fanfic as it's free and I'm broke but still pay my dues when I can. Why do people like harems?
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should be 3 nations. Frost and sand village too far away, mist allowed the stone and cloud village into their territory near the whirlpool village to garther their troops to fight the uzu village in the first place so that they couldnt prepare in time. Danzo leaked the intel on how to get there to get rid of the clan and stop fire nation from sending support
thought he was lv 2 from the quest with the mayor
cake has eggs
bgl this interaction alone made me add to library
mint picker
i thought elekid was gen 2
electabuzz is a gen 1 pokemon his evolve form is above that
i not offended, you found the book more intreging compare to me thats all
that is my point i did skim then i reread the paragraph to understand what i missed, he didnt say the world. Leaving out critical info like that ruins the books as a whole.
who be cool if mc gets a cool armor design if he finds out he's from a clan later on
I dont know much about update stability so i gave it a 3 to be neutral, The first chapter went straight into so no character background on how he got into his situation i read up to chapter 5 or 6 with the duel between disciples and i just foubd it unreadable. I felt lije there was a lot of info missing, sentences didnt make sense amd were hard to follow. If the author rewrite earlier chapter later on im willing to reread the novel as i like the concept. If author deletes this just take it as me ranting as I would love fore you to improve as an author
my only take on this is that unless he can upgrade to ethneral its pointless as no one else in his bloodline has it
there no spin or any indicator that he was going to danmachi
only 22
calling bs. rasengan is stronger than chidori. If not then sasuke wouldnt had done the cheap shot in canon