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Only a real zhongli user will feel pain reading the first sentence.
Ehh, this chapter is ok i guess. Ill give a B- for the speech. Sooo, will C.E. be more different? Or still roughly the same plot? (not saying to make a completely new plot, but add many small changes that stack up over time) A bit of a review so far: Btw, I dunno what author replied with back then. to make it clear since it wasnt that clear from wording back then. My problem with the 12th herscherr fight is not is that the result ended with them losing. But that it went nearly exactly the same way canon did. Despite the MC's influence over like what? 20+ years? Basically, the one time ein disappeared. It made it look like he had no significant effect on them at all. Made them look incompetent in comparison to canon. Like they failed all the same stat checks in canon despite ein. It would have been nice to see rin maybe block a few shots from the soldier(basically put up a bit more fight) . Or someone noticed the nukes(but cant really stop it) . You know, the little things that showed he is changing the timeline. (Its the little things that make a good story which most author don't care about, always rushing to the big action scenes) Also, the sudden power boost of the MANTIS still feels really abrupt and "deus ex machina" despite the "foreshadowings". There was not a single scene showing how they discovered the quantum ssea or imaginary space(or what they think) . Feels like the author just decided to add it at the last minute despite it we all know it not being the case. Really, as I said before. Ein did more as a soldier than a scientist. It really felt like the story would not have went any differently if he just went soldier the entire time(and be a bit creative) . (more like the only reason he went the scientist route is just to woo the girls) Scoring: Soldier: A (he actually did quite well for a soldier, and actually because he wants to save people. (most stories can't even have an MC that does this much) ) Scientist: E- (except for project odin, it didnt feel like he did anything else important. And even then in project odin, he was just heavily cheesing his adaptive body)(which is the only reason I didn't give it an F, also because most fanfic authors would fail even to do THIS much) Harem master: SSS+ (.... What did you expect? This is what most of you came to this story for. Move along...) *waves the bonkmaster 9000 threateningly* So Maybe a break chapter after the fight where Genesis and Ein chatted for a while. And genesis gave a scoring and his opinions of his run like I did. So, will the C.E. be a bit better? And not stick to canon as much? I REALLY hope the reply works this time... Thanks for the chapter!
I see, cuz I don't remember the moon blowing in canon honkai. The moon is believable. Seen weirder stuff from authors with legit mental issues which is becoming worryingly common.
Heyyy, where is the picture from? Which manga?
Yes, the comms is what i want. I was thinking of a kind of morse code(almost all our modern comms are basically morse code) or using the a.i.'s help somehow. And I can't find more stuff about quantum states thing.so basically act like a ghost then. Dont know what is the difference between the two. He can interfere electrically i think at least. Also Can't aponia help here somehow? She is pretty psychic right? Some other ideas including indierectly interfering brainwaves, to communicate in his friend's dreams? Trying not to be too "out there" with my ideas. Since no one would get it.
Oh yeah since ein can still track his friend's location. Can't he figure out a way later to use that as a way to communicate? Maybe even share his new discoveries with them. So, he wont be just missing the entire time.(he has all the time in the world here since time is relative, he just have to make time) Ein in xianxia cultivation terms is figuring out how to make a personal domain. Ascension to be a true Immortal. Meditate and Comprehend the Dao. Seriously, Ein might need to flex his xianxia protagonist aura to get out of this one.
Actually, I want to point out that contrary to what mainstream science and quantum mechanics says, the universe is not complicated or messy(complex, sure) . It actually follows very simple rules/principles(actuallly you can can reduce it down to 1 principle) . (providing evidence and proving it would take a veeerryyy Looooong essay, so i dont wanna do it here) So how ein should be tackling this problem is figure out a pattern or rule from the "mess" around him. Like cheesing a video game. So try not to brute force it like so many other fanfics and novels. He can do better. Just pointing it out. Havent watched that video in awhile(thx for reminding me what is the norm in quantum mechanics and science) . The 3rd option is somewhat right, just not complete. Information is permanent. There is no paradox. (again evidence will be pretty long) Ugh, hope the science inquisition doesnt come get me for this post.
Well, time is relative anyway. He can make himself time if he needs it.
First clue. Ein is like a fish thinking that it is swimming in "nothing". Time "moves" in a spiral. Everything would eventually return back to energy and start over. Energy has no form, no time. Light has to reflect something to be seen.a sea of pure energy has nothing to reflect. So its invisible. Easy to miss clue. I think honkai is "tainted energy", by the "tree" or something. I think author alluded that in genshin chapters.
Disaster averted!! Pheww..... Yup, I was avoiding THAT route. Thank the tuna god.... I did point out its behaviour seem to suggest it lack free-will back then. Honkai god doesn't seem to be capable of understanding emotions or human beings. If it behaves like a computer. Ein should be able to cheese it somehow. Seriously worried you were going the omniscient and omnipotent god route. But still would like ein to have done more on planet earth. Even if it didnt change "destiny"(ein doesn't know) . Its his efforts we readers would like to see.
With the way webnovel works, I don't blame you for that. I did notice the injection thing with his friends a few chapters back btw. But that feels kind of pyrrhic victory? I mean everyone else dies. He didnt even succeed in mass producing anything in canon like soulium. Was I expecting too much? I expected Ein to have more influence. I mean, in canon. World was going to end anyway. Why didn't mei just undo whatever restriction there is in the a.i. As a final gamble. What about biological computers, millions times more powerful than souliums computers hypothetically. Ein studied biology right? Maybe? I dunno, something not really canon? Atleast pretend to give his all?