Review Detail of Alex1911 in I'll Reincarnate In RWBY My Way
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This is actually a pretty good story overall, The circumstances of him getting reincarnate is unique the development of his power and and the way he act is cool too. Unfortunately, in order to make things overly dramatic, the author decide to make his clones (shadow clones jutsu) become rogues and act against his will for sometime giving reasons that they took after his personality and love freedom so they act against his will which is BS , Correct me if I'm wrong but clones don't have a will of their own so it's absolutely impossible for them to act against their creator, Author admit it himself that he did that in order to force the harem on him which I think is stupid. Then their the classic things that most readers abhor, MC in his infinite wisdom decide to tell people his secret, his cheat to a stranger, reason being learn from Ozpin mistake of keeping secret from other and lose their trust so he learnt from that, I'm just so done. If it's his family and love one whom he trust with his life, I can tolerate it but to a stranger he know not long Fcking hell. It was a good story but those two point alone make me lost all my motivation to continue reading and I'm only at the start, who know what kind of wonderful things would happen in the future chapter?
I'll Reincarnate In RWBY My Way
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Shadow Clones normally also dispel themselves when the user falls asleep or is knocked out. As I alluded to in the story, he combines his shadow clones with a bit of magic as well to make them last longer and to not immediately disappear when he falls asleep. Another side-effect of combining the element of magic into the clones is they have more personality and independence. Other people who can use the shadow clone jutsu but that do not have magic cannot have their clones linger after they fall asleep. Anyway, my story, my rules, so yeah, to make things more interesting I made his shadow clones unique through adding in magic to the mix. By the way, I have not dropped this story. I merely suffer from heatstroke / sunstroke and can get pretty miserable when it gets so hot. As a result I have been sick for about two weeks. I hope to resume writing just as soon as I feel better. Unfortunately I am not sure when that will be. Eventually I should grow moderately accustomed to the heat and be able to write again to some degree.