Reviews of I'll become a villain in my next life
I'll become a villain in my next life
Moe_Cyan_Pile
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I Understand this novel is about the path towards brcoming a villain but once an actual person makes up their mind and reincarnates, why would they think about their past actions in their previous life? Also
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I am proud of the MC, being wary and all of his surroundings and being stonecold outside because of his tragic life... I somewhat know what did he feel when everybody lied and betrayed him in his old world. btw I really wish for the author to update this more often ahaha, because it's like more exciting what would happen next.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hi it's me, your narrator. It would be a solid book if you actually read your draft twice. Before I criticise you, I want to say that the book would be good if you had a editor. First, there are no periods. Second, some words are not fully formed, and some sentences don't have commas where their are supposed to be. Third, it literally says, chapter one of chapter one. I literally can't read it without cringing.
Nice story It could have been more interesting if he had stayed in his original world. Also try to mellow down his attitude he seems less of a badass and more of a **** pissed at the world which he probably nis anyways but try to make him a cold and calculating personality that treats the rest of humankind as ants. That is an interesting villain persona. Either way good story. Has potential. If you have time do check out my story and drop a review too.
