HP: In The Magical World As An Extra

How tf can you be an extra if you are from the House of Black!!! Answer me author

Yeaaaa, nah. This fanfic was really fun at first, until author just kept on putting theory after theory after theory about anything and everything into it, not confirming any, not sctually integrating them, but just assuming them to be true, and then just as self glazing of his "incredible" theories, confirmed most through the mfing talking hat. If you wanted to theory rant about fkng harry potter, then go on reddit. This story made an interesting and magical world into a boring and political driven bs.

Before i tell you what i think of this Fanfic please note that there is only 7chapters at the time of writing this review. //\\There isn't really any translation since nothing can tell me that's one. -He updates everyday so 5/5. (Even if i know it's hard.) //\\The reason why i assign 4/5 to "Story Development"/"Character Design"/"World Background" is because all the 7 chapters are a copy of the fanfiction called "Harry Potter: Lost Son" (you can look for it on webnovel). While yes, it has been edited to be more... pleasing to read. //\\//\\ But it doesn't change the fact that the first few chapter are... well copy pasted with some editing and that's it. No change in the way the character speak or the response, nothing. //\\//\\ It's only in the last chapter 7, that the end of the chapter doesn't end the same way as the original version. So i hope the author will make the story more distinct than the "Lost Son" fanfic. //\\//\\ But Hey, it doesn't change the fact that the story is good. It would have been good if the author would have warned about it in the description of the story or at the beginning of the story.

Too many words. So much ranting and it just dragged the pacing.

Well, I doubt a fan of the story would believe and trusting goblin at the first chance it got. Anyway did I tell you that the goblin here acts like an elf, with their servitude and all? Well cheers you're in for a treat if you are looking for something different than how the original race portrayed.

dropped, one chapter smaller than the other full of talk and useless descriptions to fill sausage .................................................................

Has a good plot but I suggest you change the book title, no son of black, would be considered an extra in any book

I don't like much, but sometimes I want to read something. I hope the author will not quit his job, as it always happens everywhere 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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talking nonsense 😮‍💨 .

(5/5) I'm at 31 chp The Story is going decent for now. The MC is smart and I like that about him. I hope he remains smart. Keep up the good work 👍 (Will review again at chp100)

WN-scaled rating is 4.6 ⭐️. Non-scaled rating is 7.7/10. It’s an interesting story with good overall writing quality and update consistency. There are definitely some AU changes and drama that people complain about, but overall it’s been quite good. Recommended as of ch 69.

talk about creativity and misleading, this work is the same as the one mentioned by the other review with extra steps.

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Cara eu tava gostando, mais o cara fazer aproximadamente 7 capítulos para uma viagem de trem e a seleção de casa, sendo que 3 capítulos já seria legal foi de mais para mim

Well… Title is somewhat misleading, due to his ancestry There are some obvious grammatical mistakes Some plot holes/lore errors (some pretty annoying ones) Overall , solid writing, idea and fanfic + a nice read so far👍 Sadly, not one of my favs so far, as I like lore correctness Still, give it a try Dear author, keep up your efforts 👍👍 Unfortunately, I like the Loki ff way more

I'm ready for the novel, and to see where it goes 🙂🙃😉

Can’t remember where, or what title, but I have read a book that is a word for word copy of this. The only difference is that that book is further ahead than this one, but I guess I’ll be able to see by the next chapter or two if this is truly a different book. If this turns out to be the exact same book, and the author has posted this somewhere else under a different book name or author name, then I simply overlooked that fact and apologize for anyone who might think I am saying that this author copied the book from anyone. If, however, this is an uncredited copy then shame on the author for not giving credit where it is due.

4 star review. 4 star review. 4 star review.

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