Item: HP: In The Magical World As An Extra
Rating: 3.8
Author: TheUltimateP1e

TheUltimateP1eLv49mth

2024-07-14 09:44

Yeaaaa, nah. This fanfic was really fun at first, until author just kept on putting theory after theory after theory about anything and everything into it, not confirming any, not sctually integrating them, but just assuming them to be true, and then just as self glazing of his "incredible" theories, confirmed most through the mfing talking hat. If you wanted to theory rant about fkng harry potter, then go on reddit. This story made an interesting and magical world into a boring and political driven bs.

HP: In The Magical World As An Extra

Yggdrasil_loki

3.9

114 Chs

Liked by 27 people

Replies2

TheUltimateP1eLv4

sure bud

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8mth

Daoist_DanLv10

It's so hard to find fanfics that aren't this. If you start a story and there's idea vomit the story will be trash. Always. The story isn't focused on, the ideas are.

7mth

Other Reviews

Maurya070901Lv4

How tf can you be an extra if you are from the House of Black!!! Answer me author

10mth

HumbuubLv4

Too many words. So much ranting and it just dragged the pacing.

9mth

OrionsLv2

Before i tell you what i think of this Fanfic please note that there is only 7chapters at the time of writing this review. //\\There isn't really any translation since nothing can tell me that's one. -He updates everyday so 5/5. (Even if i know it's hard.) //\\The reason why i assign 4/5 to "Story Development"/"Character Design"/"World Background" is because all the 7 chapters are a copy of the fanfiction called "Harry Potter: Lost Son" (you can look for it on webnovel). While yes, it has been edited to be more... pleasing to read. //\\//\\ But it doesn't change the fact that the first few chapter are... well copy pasted with some editing and that's it. No change in the way the character speak or the response, nothing. //\\//\\ It's only in the last chapter 7, that the end of the chapter doesn't end the same way as the original version. So i hope the author will make the story more distinct than the "Lost Son" fanfic. //\\//\\ But Hey, it doesn't change the fact that the story is good. It would have been good if the author would have warned about it in the description of the story or at the beginning of the story.

10mth

VVartzLv14

Well, I doubt a fan of the story would believe and trusting goblin at the first chance it got. Anyway did I tell you that the goblin here acts like an elf, with their servitude and all? Well cheers you're in for a treat if you are looking for something different than how the original race portrayed.

9mth

Wilder6Lv15

Has a good plot but I suggest you change the book title, no son of black, would be considered an extra in any book

9mth

jmmrrLv5

dropped, one chapter smaller than the other full of talk and useless descriptions to fill sausage .................................................................

8mth

DaoistPHfxL0Lv2

I don't like much, but sometimes I want to read something. I hope the author will not quit his job, as it always happens everywhere 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Exo_ManLv4

talking nonsense 😮‍💨 .

8mth

AKZALOTHLv4

Reveal spoiler

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