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WarLovingMortal

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Kill one, terrify a thousand.

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  • WarLovingMortal
    WarLovingMortal11d ago
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    5/5 at 128th Chp This is brilliant. Finally something exciting to read. The planning of everything was good. But let's see how you handle the actual war part. And, make sure to win WW2, i wanna see how the world would change if germany had the won the war. Keep up the good work. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜‰

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    WarLovingMortal2 months ago
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    5/5 at 385th chp. This is definitely a gem. A slow build towards the main story. And, i personally like the consistency of being cautious by the MC. In my personal opinion, the story does seems to have few plot holes and some decisions taken by the MC that i don't agree. But, who cares, the fic is actually worth reading. I binged this in 4 days. Keep up the good work. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š

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    WarLovingMortal2 months ago
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    5/5 at Chp 07 It was decent. It's been a long time since I have read any smut, bcoz usually most writers bend the logic too much and make it unrealistic for my taste. Although, first half was decent, second half was okay I guess, in terms of logic, but i was already half way there, so i read it. It was good. The author does have potential in writing. Keep up the good work. ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐ŸŒ

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    WarLovingMortal3 months ago
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    5/5 at 134chp The story is pretty good. Naruto is pragmatic, efficient and intelligent. Most Naruto fanfics are westernized power fantasies but this seems very realistic for a Shinobi Village perspective. The story still needs polishing and well there are plot holes, but I did enjoy reading this fic, so it's all good. Keep up the good work. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜‰

  • WarLovingMortal
    WarLovingMortal3 months ago
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    5/5 at 215th Chp. This was a great journey. The story is brilliantly written. I'm not even christian but at the end when Baldwin died on the hill, I'll literally felt tears. What a great story. And, decent ending aswell. I expect more stories from the Author. Keep up the good work. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜‰

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  • WarLovingMortal
    WarLovingMortal3 months ago
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    5/5 I'm at 125chp The fic is brilliantly written. Adjoining the facts with fiction like this, pretty good. Keep up the good work. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Œ Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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  • WarLovingMortal
    WarLovingMortal5 months ago
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    5/5 Decent The story was dramatic. Although, not exactly my type of story. Still, the execution of the story was decent. The ending could have been better, but i suppose that was alright as well. In the end, I would just say, Keep up the good work. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ

  • WarLovingMortal
    WarLovingMortal5 months ago
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    5/5 Pretty Good Thankyou. Just thankyou. And, keep doing the great work.๐Ÿ‘ Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • WarLovingMortal
    WarLovingMortal8 months ago
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    5/5 Just 21 chapters and a rollercoaster. Man this is gooooood. Finally a daimyo with a backbone. Fking love it. Please continue the empire building.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜

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    WarLovingMortal10 months ago
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    5/5 Beautiful This was beautiful. An AU Game of Thrones. Fkin wonderful. Thanks for the story. ........................................................................................................................................................

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